Wednesday, January 27, 2016

The Ossuary

This week I combined the prompt from Master Class and Studio 30 Plus.  I've been listening to The Glass of Time by Michael Cox lately and the two prompts came together in such a perfect way in my head.  Let me know what you think and be sure to check out other great prompt responses via the respective buttons below!

Oh, what a vain, wretched hopes I had standing in that cold ossuary.  What delusion had led me to believe my mistress still drew breath.  I’d seen the cold, pallor of her face.  The sightless gaze of her flat, unmoving eyes.  She had gone into that place all souls fled when the mortal coil was shed.

Yet, here I was.  Standing at her vault in the dead of night, believing with all my pathetic soul that she had not really fled this world.  Stranger yet, I could not say why I thought she still lived.  Not with any clarity or understanding that would yield any meaning should anyone inquire.

Such a folly it had been, becoming so intimately acquainted with my mistress.  Her siren’s allure drew me as surely as Odysseus, only I had no sailors to restrain me from answering that tantalizing call.  Surely, I have met a doom worthy of Homer’s epic at the hands of my mistress.  And, still, I stand at this mausoleum, this sanctuary of death, and hope for a life that has utterly destroyed mine.


Oh, what wretched hopes.


             Master Class

4 comments:

  1. Such mournful sadness. Wretched hopes indeed.

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    1. If I could have figured out how to do it, he'd have gotten more than he bargained for. Might have to come back to revisit this and see if I can get the whole scene I had in my head down. Thanks for stopping by!

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  2. Longing for the impossible - you really do a great job of capturing that despair.

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    1. Thank you! It helps that I had that Victorianesque story in my head, with all that eloquence that lends itself to despair and tragedy so well.

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