Showing posts with label 33 words. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 33 words. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 12, 2014

Wishful Thinking

Okay, so this is not exactly a Valentine's Day piece - but Trifecta asked for a 33 word piece about love gone wrong.  We had to avoid using the words love, sad, tears, wept, heart, or pain.  Here's my response.  Concrit, what there is to offer in a 33 word piece, is always welcome.


Blood, spraying everywhere.  The knife held in a white-knuckle grip.  His body cooling on the floor.

“You’re not going to cheat on me again.”

She shook her head, clearing her mind of daydreams.



Be sure to check out the other responses - they're short and quick!

Thursday, January 30, 2014

Coffee Shop Window

Trifecta gave us the following picture for inspiration to write 33 words about it:


Thomas Leuthard / Foter / CC BY
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If you click on the picture above it will bring you to the photographer's attribution page.

I offer my response:

“Study hard.”
“Find a better life.”
No!
Look up!
Life is passing you by.
It’s about the
Journey
Not the destination.
With you head down
Books scattered ‘round
You’re missing the point.

Be sure to head over to Trifecta Writing Challenge via the badge below to see what others said about this picture in just 33 words!

Wednesday, January 15, 2014

A Prayer

Sorry I missed a few weeks.  Things got rather nuts.  Anyway, here's this weeks Trifecta Challenge:

We are asking for a 33-word response to the following snippet:
The first time I saw. . .


 Here's the catch: all of your 33 words must be one syllable each.  We're going low-brow on your this week.  Or not.  Can you class it up under these restrictions?  Give us your best.

To clarify, we are giving you 5 words.  We want another 33 from you, for a grand total of 38.


Here's my response:
The first time I saw you I loved you.
Your soul pulled me in.
I was drawn to you like a moth to a flame.
I gave you my heart.
Please don’t let it burn.  I beg you.

Be sure to click on Trifecta here or above to see other amazing responses to this prompt!


Saturday, December 7, 2013

Love and Loss

The Trifextra Weekend prompt was to use the words basin, dazzle and myopic in a piece totaling 33 words.  This is somewhat reflective of some things I've been dealing with at work with several kids.  Concrit is always welcome.  Be sure to follow the link above to see what others have done with this prompt.

A basin
Overflowing with
Hopelessness
Creates a myopic view
Of the Future

Then
Coming into focus
Desire
Lust
A hope
To dazzle and blind

A new myopic view
Blends together
Love and loss


Saturday, November 23, 2013

Questioning

The Trifextra 33 word weekend prompt was to pick any word and use that exact same word (no modifying it) 3 times in those 33 words.  The inspiration for these 33 words is a kid I've worked on and off with at work for a while.  This kid struggles with these questions on a regular basis regardless of what anyone has tried to say.  It just breaks my heart.


Why do you love me?
Why do you choose to love me?
When all is said and done
The day is over
And everyone else has left
Why do you still love me?


Be sure to head over to Trifecta Writing Challenge to see what others came up with for their thrice repeated word in 33 words.


Saturday, September 21, 2013

August 2012

Trifecta's 33 word weekend prompt put me in mind of my subject right away.  Feeling brave after some feedback from one of the last prompts I responded to on another site, I decided to write another poem.  Let me know what you think!


Pain
Then numbness
A tug or two
Then a cry
Such a beautiful cry
Sending tears down my face
Tiny and wet
Wrinkled and a bit blue
Delicate fingers
Steel blue eyes
Perfection



Friday, August 23, 2013

Dreamland

This was a fun little prompt to write.  Trifecta wanted a 33 word bedtime story - no nightmares.  I used this week's Don't Panic Picture Prompt as an inspiration.  Here's my bedtime story.


Sunlight sparkling on waves
Fairies dancing
Dragons roaring

They’re waiting for you

To go there
Close your eyes
Say it Thrice

Take me to Dreamland

     Take me to Dreamland



                 Take me to Dreamland


If you haven't checked out the Don't Panic Picture Prompt, follow the link and it will take you there.  

Friday, July 19, 2013

Questioning

Trifecta gave us an interesting weekend challenge this weekend.  Using only 33 words, write a piece using the words water, ring and stage.  Here’s my entry.  As always, be sure to check out other uses of these 3 words in a 33-word piece.

It had a ring of truth.
The water stopped.
They walked away
Thinking they’d won.
He knew better.
He smiled,
Finding Triumph
Even in Defeat.
The lights dimmed.
The stage cleared.

Silence reigned.

Sunday, February 24, 2013

Rearranging Words

Trifecta gave us another word puzzle for this weekend's 33 word challenge.  The puzzle is as follows:

Below are photos from the 33rd page of one of our very favorite books, Elizabeth Strout's Olive Kitteridge.  What we want you to do is to scour the page (click to enlarge), choose 33 words, and reshape those words into a piece of your own.  Your piece does not have to tell an entire story.  We just want to see what you can do with this particular word bank.  Punctuation is up to you.  Use whatever you need, whether or not it appears in the photos.
While I did not include the photos, here is the link back to Trifecta's page for the photos.  While you're there, check out other solutions to this word puzzle!

Here's mine -

Remnants of corporeality
 
Hidden umbrage
State of panic
 
Gull bones at the water’s edge
Starflowers on pine needles
The fat seagull squawking
 
The inner blankness
A need to devour life
 
No comforting quiescence

Saturday, February 9, 2013

20 Hrs., 40 Min.

I've actually finished two books in my Goodreads challenge so far.  But, I'm going to review my second one first.  Partly because it's shorter and a stand alone book so it's easier for me to figure out how to write about it without giving anything away.  And, partly because I'm also linking up to Trifextra's weekend challenge with this book.

The book is 20 Hrs., 40 Min by Amelia Earhart.  The 33 word quote I chose for the Trifextra challenge is this:

“…on the flight I think two questions have been asked of me most frequently.  First: Was I afraid?  Second: What did I wear?  I’m sorry to be a disappointment in answering the first…”
 
I love the idea that these were the two most frequently asked questions upon Earhart's return from being the first woman to fly across the Atlantic Ocean.  By the way, she goes on to say she was not afraid on the flight.
 
The book is a quick, easy read.  From a literary stand point I didn't find much remarkable about it.  But, I don't think that is a fair way to judge the book.  Earhart's voice comes through clearly in her writing, so much so that she has become a person I would put on my list of famous people in history I wish I could meet.  She is straight forward in her telling of this part of her story and gives credit where credit is due.
 
Earhart wrote the book shortly after the flight was made.  She points out several times she was merely a passenger on this flight.  She is careful to make clear she felt the credit for the flight should be focused on Wilmer Stultz, the pilot, and Louis Gordon, the mechanic, who actually flew the plane.  Earhart came across to me as someone who was not looking for the fame but was willing to use it to advance one of her passions - aviation.
 
Interestingly, aviation was NOT Earhart's main love.  She, at heart, called herself a social worker.  She was working in a settlement house prior to Friendship's flight across the Atlantic and, once in England, her favorite part of the trip was visiting settlement houses in London.
 
Overall I enjoyed the book.  While some dispute how much of her fame was deserved and how much she merely capitalized on the work of others, after reading this, I think she was very aware of this balance.  Some of her fame came from the work of others and she acknowledged this.  Yet, Earhart also did many things to earn the fame in her own right, such as setting the female aviation altitude record at one point.

Saturday, January 26, 2013

That Smell

Trifecta gave us a fun 33 word weekend challenge:

We want you to give us a 33-word example of personification.  Wait.  What?  You forget what that is?  It's the practice of attaching human traits and characteristics with inanimate objects, phenomena and animals (http://literary-devices.com).

I don't think I have to explain what I am personifying here...
 
Reaching out
Tickling your nose
Knowing it will
Slap your face
When you look.
Could someone tell me
How something so small
Could produce that smell
 
Do I have to change your diaper?

Friday, January 18, 2013

Suspicion

Trifecta's 33 word prompt for the weekend was to choose one of the pictures provided and write 33 words inspired by it.  Here's the picture I chose and what it inspired:

Bruno. C. / Art Photos / CC BY

 
 
 
Suspicion. 
Veiled joy. 
What do you want?  What are you going to do to me? 
Peace in poverty. 
Worry in wealth. 
 How are you going to change my world?  For better or worse?
 
 
 
 
Be sure to check out the other pictures, as well as the excellent literary offerings inspired by them, at www.trifectawritingchallenge.com

Sunday, September 30, 2012

The Add On

Trifextra's challenge this week was to take an earlier 33 word Trifextra response and add another 33 words.  Here's my first response:


“Please.  Just one beer,” he begged at the door.
“Nope.  Not allowed,” the bouncer replied.
He rode away, wobbling to and fro.
Front tire turned.
A sudden stop.
Up and over he went.


Here's the additional 33 words:

Upon the curb he sat
World spinning ‘round
Scratching his bleeding head
“What just happened?”
Bleary eyes failed to see
The crimson stream.
Struggled to his feet
Whomp, whomp, whomp
Bumpy ride home.


Any concrit is welcome!