Here are the prompts for the week:
Trifecta -
This week's word is:
BITCH (noun)
1: the female of the dog or some other carnivorous mammals
2 a : a lewd or immoral woman
b : a malicious, spiteful, or overbearing woman —sometimes used as a generalized term of abuse
3: something that is extremely difficult, objectionable, or unpleasant
2 a : a lewd or immoral woman
b : a malicious, spiteful, or overbearing woman —sometimes used as a generalized term of abuse
3: something that is extremely difficult, objectionable, or unpleasant
Please
remember:
- Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
- You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
- The word itself needs to be included in your response.
Write at the Merge gave us these two things:
So here's my 333 word take on the two prompts:
“Well,” I
blinked, trying to find words, “Ain’t that a bitch.”
He was right. We all knew it. I didn’t want an ordinary life.
“Come with
me,” Kris said in a tone that almost commanded.
Part of me
wanted to refuse just because he expected me to listen. His jaw tightened. He saw my instinct to refuse out of spite.
“Lead on my
furry friend.”
That didn’t
seem to go over well either. But, what
can I say? I tend to be a smart ass when
I’m uncomfortable, which was a massive understatement right then.
I followed
Kris through the house, though mansion would be more accurate. We stepped out onto the huge stone
veranda. I noticed a heart set in stone
near the door. It seemed odd, yet
fitting, for Kris. James trailed behind
us. I got the impression from James
that, no matter what Kris did or where he went, James would be right there with
him. Again, I wasn’t sure that was a
good thing. But, what the hell, I was
already in way over my head. What difference
would it make to see this through now?
The formal
English garden that greeted me was impressive.
I didn’t think there was a single pebble out of place. The huge tract of completely untouched land
just beyond the garden didn’t fit the scene.
“Okay. I’m here.
Why’d you bring me out here?”
Kris didn’t
answer. He passed through the garden
into that undeveloped land and chose a game trail. James stopped at the edge of the trees. I hesitated, unsure of what to do. James gestured for me to follow Kris.
“You feel
better out here,” Kris said once James couldn’t hear us anymore.
“And how do
you know that?”
“I told
you. You’re a druid. I’m a faoladh, werewolf for lack of a better
translation. I know what you feel, what
you need. That’s my job.”
This guy was
seriously creeping me out. What the hell
was going on here?
WIcked!
ReplyDelete:) ahhhh I like this
ReplyDeleteAwesome! Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteInteresting read & piques one's curiosity as to what happens next:-)
ReplyDeleteGood. I'm glad to hear it is still an enticing story. Thanks!
DeleteEven after 'my furry friend' I didn't expect that. Hmmm, I wonder what happens. Intriguing.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I'm thinking there will be all sorts of twists and turns before the end on this one...
DeleteI'm with Steph, I missed the furry friend hint! I thought this was really well set up, I could picture crystal clearly where they were.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I am glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteNice! Fun story, I'll be interested in seeing where this goes.
ReplyDeleteCool! I'm having fun writing it. Thanks for stopping.
Delete"You feel better out here." I'm loving where this is going. But then, I'm such a weirdo.
ReplyDeleteDoes that mean I'm a weirdo for writing it? :p
DeleteEither way, it's fun! Thanks!
Werewolves <3
ReplyDeleteI'm hoping to make this a whole new twist on werewolves following a different folklore POV...But they are sweet, aren't they?
DeleteVery interesting!! Thanks so much for linking up this week!
ReplyDeleteThank you! The prompt worked well to move this story line along.
DeleteThis is shaping up to be a great story! I hope that you plan to make this a novel...
ReplyDeleteI hadn't even thought about it...but I was kicking around an idea for Precipice with these guys. I am hoping I can get time to get it written and revised before the deadline.
DeleteI like the twist on the werewolf. The sensing what you need aspect makes sense. He's a canine companion. ;)
ReplyDeleteLove where this is going. Well done!
Thanks! The werewolf in this is based off of Irish folklore. Many of them are protectors there.
DeleteIt's always a nice twist one one of the main characters is thrown for a loop in a situation they think they understand.
ReplyDeleteThanks! With the way this is playing out in my head, Emma's going to experience quite a bit more of that before it's over.
DeleteThe whole idea of a werewolf being a canine companion is intriguing, though I did have to double back to catch the clue!
ReplyDelete~Cam
I hadn't meant it that way until you guys started bringing it up, but it fits well since that is pretty much what Kris is at this point. Thanks!
DeleteI got the furry friend tip, but then questioned myself a bit. :)
ReplyDeleteNope. You had it. Her life is about to get REALLY interesting.
DeleteSomething happened to my comment. I wondered why the referral to furry friend. Great job!
ReplyDeleteNot sure about the comment, but I'm glad you stopped by. I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteNice! Liked the twist. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad my different version of a werewolf is working. I didn't want the standard Hollywood version. That's been done too many times. Thanks for stopping by!
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