“Yorin. Find me
someone from the city. A citizen. Don’t scare him but bring him to me. I want to see what the citizens know about
the army.”
“I’ll see who I can find that may have useful information.”
Maroshek turned back to the battalion commanders as Yorin
left the building. Each reported in on
losses and last minute changes in battle plans.
Maroshek, satisfied with what he heard, sent them on to their respective
battalions. He then checked in on the
one company left to guard the gate and tend to the battlefield just outside the
city. When he returned Yorin was waiting
with a man who looked older than the city itself. And, considering the capitol had been in existence
for over seven hundred years, that was saying something.
“Good sir,” Maroshek crouched down in front of the old man
seated on a stool, “Do you know where so many of the soldiers from the royal
army have gone? Are they hiding
somewhere?”
“No.”
Maroshek furrowed his brow.
He was about to say something when the man continued.
“They’re sick. Many
of them are dead. It’s her.”
Maroshek blinked several times, “What do you mean?”
“Summer fever. Most
of the royal army contracted it. Those
who aren’t dead are still recovering.
Only a few have managed to remain on the walls.”
“What about the rest of what you said?”
The old man grinned at Maroshek, “I know who you are
Lion. You seek her. She did this.
She gave them the fever.”
“You speak of Jaylen,” Maroshek fell back on his heels.
“I do. The Phoenix
Queen comes. The summer fever protected
those who believed in her and destroyed many who did not.”
“And the ones on the walls?
How have they survived?”
“The Overlord protected a few. As many as he could.”
“Do you know if he is still in the city?”
The old man shook his head and studied his feet. Maroshek took a deep breath and stood. He clasped the man on the shoulder before
turning to Yorin.
“What do you think?”
Yorin scrubbed his face for several seconds, “I’m not sure
what to think. From what I’ve seen it
makes sense. But really? It’s hard to believe.”
“Well then, please make sure this man gets back to his house
safely and we’ll go check it out. There
is most certainly more going on here than we know.”
who knew Summer fever could be more deadly than Spring Fever ? (which brings love, lust and dreamy-eyed-states to the afflicted)
ReplyDeleteWhat a clever way to work in the prompt. I liked this very much.
Thanks! When I saw the prompt it hit me that this fit perfectly into the theme of the Phoenix in this story.
DeleteInteresting tale. Has almost a medieval feel to it.
ReplyDeleteWow. You got me hook, line, and sinker!
ReplyDeleteThanks! That reassures me that I'm on the right track with this one.
DeleteI love the description "looked older than the city itself". You built it up and there is certainly more to know about in this tale!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I'm glad you stopped by!
DeleteIntriguing. I'm eager to read where you take this story line.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I can't wait to finish this one as well. My goal is to get it finished, polished, and hopefully published sometime soon.
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