“I’ve been
thinking,” a blond youth commented.
“You know
that’s a dangerous past time,” his teacher replied with a smile, “What’s on
your mind, Jaris?”
“What makes
something what it is?”
The older
man’s brow crinkled and his wooly bear caterpillar eyebrows drew down to shade
his dark eyes.
“I mean,
sir, the old saying about a bell being just a cup until it is struck. But, that’s not entirely true. One could strike a cup in the same manner as
one struck a bell but it’s still a cup. What
makes the bell different, Marken?”
Marken
stopped walking, his brow smoothed, and his eyes lost focus. Jaris waited while his teacher pondered his
question. After several minutes of still
silence, Marken began to move down the trail, only at a slower pace this time.
“Purpose,”
he finally spoke to his pupil, “A thing’s purpose is what defines it. Take the statues around us.”
“What
statues?” Jaris scanned the boulders they’d been passing.
“Look
closer,” Marken paused in their journey.
Jaris
circled several boulders before coming to one near Marken. Rounding the backside, Jaris made out the
weather worn features of a face. Part of
the cheek and nose were missing.
“I didn’t
know these rocks used to be statues.”
“Exactly. They lost their purpose. Without that, they ceased to be statues and
became rocks.”
Marken
leaned against the rock head while Jaris pondered this. He knew his apprentice needed some time to
think before he let the next question fly.
Marken even had an idea as to what it would be. Too bad he didn’t have an answer.
“I know I’m
the chosen of the gods. But what does
that mean, Marken? What is my purpose?”
I love this. "A thing's purpose is what defines it"
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Thanks!
DeleteI really like the underlying message in this piece. Well-written and engaging characters. And I think you can make the case for your use of fly. :)
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DeleteIsn't that something we all deal with? What is our purpose? It's just a journey of figuring that out. Thanks for linking up with WOE!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to have to chance to write an link up again. And, yes, I think we are all on a journey of figuring out our purpose. I think that's a big piece of why this scene really jumped out at me this time.
DeleteI try to follow my instincts, but sometimes I think they are speaking to me in a foreign language and I just can't get the piece write. This one was somewhere in between that and knowing I nailed it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteI like the subtle twists, things that make you think in between the words. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you. It's humbling to know someone thinks my writing is thought provoking.
DeleteShort, sweet and thought provoking. Absolutely loved it. Great piece!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I love that it made you think.
DeleteReminds me of when the Dali Lhama (?) was recruited as a young boy and raised to be the next leader not yet really old enough to comprehend. Great premise, Grasshopper ;-O Loved the interactions and the line quoted by others...a thing's purpose is what defines it. Although sometimes new purposes can be found through creativity. Hmmm. You have my mind really rooted in this. That's a good thing!
ReplyDeleteHmmm. That's an intriguing idea to explore with this. Thanks!
Delete'A thing's purpose defines it'...very nice. I like what you did with this, even if it was "on the fly".
ReplyDeleteAs for trying to get back into the prompts, don't beat yourself up if you miss things here or there. It will work out eventually. Glad that you are back!
Thanks. I am glad to be back - even if it is sporadically. I appreciate the compliment. Thanks for stopping by!
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